sweet21's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pose]

Eugh

What happened to his chin? Make it a pointed "V" shape curving up. Damn just look at some reference pictures, they really help.

[Shock!]

he doesn't even looked shocked

if he's suppose to be shocked his eyes must be wide open, not half closed, and his mouth even wider open.

[Thinking]

You screwed up on his hand big time

i can't even really figure out what the hand is like.
he can't be making an "L" hand shape.....then again i can't tell. Fix the hand kid.

[The Toucan]

really good.

Nice detail, smooth color transition, great shading, this is great.

BlackLabelBobbie responds:

Thanks a lot! this was only my second time working with water colour pencils. I hope to gradually get better and improve my technique!

[The Overlord vs Larry]

his head is ill proprtioned....

Oh yes it is!
.Too small of a head
. right arm is kinda....gimpy.
.Well Larry just has a crooked standing position in general......

[Madness aftermath]

Wauw!

And then awe struck ensued.

[Desert Island]

hmmm.....

im sorry but i can't tell whats what.

Los-Illuminados responds:

check the stock bro

[Franky]

thats awesome

Yeah it really is. His 6 pack is kinda low down though isn't it?

[Skull]

Hmmm.....

Yeah it's alright but there is something about it, something you messed up on but i can't put my finger on it.