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[LOL]

Ha

it's so whacky it's great.

Jae responds:

D thanks buddy

[1st try on an artist tablet]

Ya done good my boy >:(

Awesome first attempt at a tablet drawing. Hands look right, the eyes kind of bother me. There is no pupil, only glare. you should add them, maybe some shading. Nice hair too, i would say you did good. You have potential, just remember to practice. And next time add a body, it's confusing, it's like her hands are floating in mid air.

pukipow responds:

ty 4 the tips

[Cheetah]

Thats great.

Fantastic drawing. Nice in detail and everything.

coldtrojan responds:

Thanks! Really put effort in this one, also better since it's a way more recent drawing than the rest is.

[Playstation 3 Controller]

Cool

it's accurate to the design. i notice you try and darken by going back and stroking lines after you just set them in, try not to do that, it's very, very noticeable.
i like to make a sort of "outline" lightly with my pencil, then darken it in, it looks more professional that way and the overall transition of the drawing is much smoother.

coldtrojan responds:

Thanks! To be honest I've never really bothered with doing...you know..'better' but I will definetly remember that tip :)

[Dark Magician Girl]

great

Looks very cute. did a good job with the head shape and the eyes look great. Only thing i can complain about is that the head shape should be a bit smoother. The side to the right looks kind of sharp, it looks more masculate.
Still it's a very minor problem you only see if you really focus, everything else from clothes, blush, and details of the face are great.

coldtrojan responds:

Yeah I noticed that same problem but I didn't notice untill after I scanned and uploaded it to places lol

[My old characters]

Cool

Nice anime style, guy on the top left....Whats with the bird?

[Cartoon Me]

only one problem

His eyes are really big so he looks surprised and kind of like he's giving a 1000 mile stare however the wrinkles on his clothing and everything else is just fine.

TYLER-NIXON responds:

yeah I wanted to go back and change it but I was to far to go back when I noticed it.

and it was my first time drawing on a wacom lol.

[kaboom]

well

For the most part i'd say you shaded the weapons quite well and your doing a good job on the smoke (or fire) coming from the guns.
All-in-all the weapons look cool but the character in the middle doesn't look that great. Something about his lips or teeth or whatever they are suppose to be i just don't like.

john-crazy responds:

aja ¬¬

[:3 -w- :D]

okay

his guitar seems abit out of proportion, it should be more...down and...NOT sideways looking.
And im not sure but it looks like he's wearing a skirt or something.
Hand looks like a claw or crane is gripping it and not a human hand.

john-crazy responds:

yeah yeah,¬¬

[SOLDIER Zombie]

...........

Well the arm reaching out at you looks alright but the other hand i can't even tell if it's closed or anything, i think it is but i can't be sure.
But it's cool.