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[NWAR: Vision Quest]

I love this guys narration, just hilarious. lots of cheesy puns and clever jokes, a good caricature of cliche gumshoe detectives. I like the use of colors later on in the video. overall, just hilarious.

danmarkowitz responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Extraneous]

Nice, psychedelic. Smooth animation and good music.

KartuneHustla responds:

Thaks for the review

["Phone"]

Wasn't very well done. Ther voice acting alone is very sub par. The joke, overdone, and all the characters are transparent. If you wanted to fix that all you had to do was fill the character with white, keeping the 'paper' look I assume you were trying to achieve, while keeping the characters solid.
Good first try, you show potential.

dontknowbinary responds:

Hey man. Thanks for the review! Yeah, Flash had one launch till it actually went down the drain, so this was done in an hour. I wanted to release it because I have been complaining about my shitty animating to someone to the point where they MADE me make an animation. I didn't want to disappoint. The voice acting? I thought that... okay. I will remake this though, WHEN Adobe doesn't rip me off.

Again, thanks for the review :3

PS: The transparent characters were meant to be done, when the final product was done, I regretted it. But at the time, Flash was already closed down :c

[BANAHNAZ INN PIDGAMAZZ]

It was alright but the explosions and areas that needed to be emphasized lacked impact. Still found it funny, was pretty good.

Speedo responds:

Yeah, I'm shit at animating explosions, its literally just 2 frames repeated over and over. I'M HOPIN' AFTER EFFECTS HAS LOTS OF EXPLAPLOSIONS IN IT IF I GET IT

[Not so Happy Ending]

It's okay. Not that great, simply okay. The animation and whatnot was done fine.

Jae responds:

HELLO

[muffin talks]

What is this some sort of joke?

What derived you to think this was a good idea? It's a 10 second flash with a joke that isn't even funny. The poor voice quality and picture quality just adds insult to injury.

Leezone responds:

Sorry to have injured your refined and experienced sensibilities. not everyone understands my complicated sense of humor. lol

[Mike is Gay]

alright

Sometimes there is some sort of "frame skip" the screen goes black for maybe half a second mid conversation sometimes.
Would be better if there was a re-play button, kinda funny, it got my attention and kept it, good thing is you didn't drag it out too long.

MigitMadness responds:

Thanks for the review. When we made this video we were putting it together with Windows Movie Maker. Because of this it kept adding that random black into frames. Our most recent videos do not have this though. We may eventually go back and fix all of our videos with the black frames in it.

[Copcicles]

Yes this is great

Voice acting was sketchy though, you need a better mic.
As for animation you need to practice at it some more.
Still this video was humorous and i liked the jokes.

The-Mercenary responds:

eh this was just something spontaneous, I can animate a great deal better but I dont think its necessary for something like this. The voice acting is the way it is on purpose. I actually have really expensive mic and audio interface, flash just compressed the shit out of the audio (which I can easily fix).

[Firing Machine]

Boring

i was bored after the 4th shot, i liked the song but other than that it was just a really boring game

Lorkas responds:

Yeah, I made this a long time ago. Didn't take me too long. I guess I could've made it a bit longer.