Stiff and plain
The characters look stiff. Doesn't look like they're going to fight at all, in fact it looks like they are just chatting. The image is taken too far for me to look at specific facial features, but their faces just seem to a line and two dots.
Hair just look like molded over clay.
The dirt, grass, tant and armor are all severely lacking texture. They look smooth and dull.
Overall, this feels unfinished and like im looking back at an animation from 1986.
All very true, but that's what you get with real-time animation and no formal education with art/3D... it's all one big WIP, mate. ;)
Has it's fair share of flaws.
It's not bad but there are problems, the character itself looks very blocky and not well rounded. Mostly in the fingers and feet. There's a problem with the shading, at first I thought the guy pissed himself. Tie looks more like a leech that just started feeding and there's an odd, blue discoloration in the neck. The pant legs are uneven, one is showing a sock the other isn't.
he's wearing tweed and a little messy, give him a break :P
Pawsome!
Completely irrelevant compliment but OKAY! This is a nice piece of work, im always a fan of this "alternate universe" stuff. It's fun to see how cartoons would look like if they were say anime or American comic's style. There is a great to fair amount of detail to each character, whereas Jake looks scruffy and out-of-place the unicorn and skeleton over there are perfectly in tune with the theme. Awesome job.
Thanks. I never really had it in mind to draw a theme, just the characters in sorta my style as I doodled them.
Ya done good my boy >:(
Awesome first attempt at a tablet drawing. Hands look right, the eyes kind of bother me. There is no pupil, only glare. you should add them, maybe some shading. Nice hair too, i would say you did good. You have potential, just remember to practice. And next time add a body, it's confusing, it's like her hands are floating in mid air.
ty 4 the tips
Thats great.
Fantastic drawing. Nice in detail and everything.
Thanks! Really put effort in this one, also better since it's a way more recent drawing than the rest is.
Cool
it's accurate to the design. i notice you try and darken by going back and stroking lines after you just set them in, try not to do that, it's very, very noticeable.
i like to make a sort of "outline" lightly with my pencil, then darken it in, it looks more professional that way and the overall transition of the drawing is much smoother.
Thanks! To be honest I've never really bothered with doing...you know..'better' but I will definetly remember that tip :)
great
Looks very cute. did a good job with the head shape and the eyes look great. Only thing i can complain about is that the head shape should be a bit smoother. The side to the right looks kind of sharp, it looks more masculate.
Still it's a very minor problem you only see if you really focus, everything else from clothes, blush, and details of the face are great.
Yeah I noticed that same problem but I didn't notice untill after I scanned and uploaded it to places lol
only one problem
His eyes are really big so he looks surprised and kind of like he's giving a 1000 mile stare however the wrinkles on his clothing and everything else is just fine.
yeah I wanted to go back and change it but I was to far to go back when I noticed it.
and it was my first time drawing on a wacom lol.
well
For the most part i'd say you shaded the weapons quite well and your doing a good job on the smoke (or fire) coming from the guns.
All-in-all the weapons look cool but the character in the middle doesn't look that great. Something about his lips or teeth or whatever they are suppose to be i just don't like.
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