sweet21's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[NBK Shirt]

Nice job. Excellent look, shading and use of red to pop out even more.
Hopefully this survives the wash...

Stark-Heather responds:

Thanks!. Yes, it survived.lol

[cannibal maybe?]

That would actually be a cool half mask to wear. Much better than that overused skull half mask. But I got a bone to pick with those eyes. They look larger than life. on a side note, tiny horns.

Orvein responds:

I love big eyes, so all my girls have wide and disproportionate eyes)

[Price Check]

Hilarious. These get better and better as time goes on.

ToonHole responds:

We're just like wine!... Completely overrated.

[Teh Comic - 06 - Flab]

Understandable. You're not alone. Also great drawings and stuff.

Fatherlessgoat responds:

Thanks a bunch. :) Seriously, everyone keeps saying you're self-loathing or something when you point out things on your body. Kinda just don't like my titties jiggling is all.<.<;

[Saito Bibliotheque]

Oh mah gawd dem lips! Above average, in fact well made. It deviates from standard anime in some unique ways, which I like. However some of the women are abit manly looking. Namely the pink haired one....Well. Its alright.

Reabault responds:

I don't consider it anime or manga or what have you, it's just my comic style and it's based more on western comic styles :)
And yeah I was going for a butch look to the pink haired girl, came out a bit too well... or should I say not well :p
thanks

[Neptunia 2]

Of course T_T
WELL! First of all, her breasts just completely engulfed her stomach, as in it's completely non-existent. This makes the character looks irregular seeing as she is missing an entire section of her body. Left hand is...im actually not sure what it's doing. Her nose is...a bug bite :|
Other than that there is a problem with her hips, they look too "perfect circle-e" as in I can't really define the curves.

Jcdr responds:

I can't do much about the breasts as they were requested that size, the nose is basically the same type I've been drawing before.

I see what you say about the hand and the hips, I'll try to fix those errors next time.

[Sonic Print]

Cool drawing but severely hurt because you put a DA logo over most of it.

SonicRocksMySocks responds:

Like the description implies, I sell this print at conventions so I watermark them to prevent theft.

[The giver of life]

Bland. My main problem is with the hair and coloring. The hair is a bunch of unorganized lines and the coloring does nothing to help. Shading is almost non existent, you really just threw dark and light lines in random spots without any regard to anatomy.

M-Maher responds:

love you too

[Super Ife Land]

Ohoho you SARCASTIC BA- Oh.... okay. Well it's not much to look at. Background and such is very plain. You could do so much more with it, perhaps ad so many nutty and completely random things in the background, enemies, a boss I dunno. Something to fill it in. There's only two character and they're not much to look at either. Overall the piece is bland.

Jcdr responds:

Thanks, I didn't want to crowd the entire piece with lots of mobs and sprite everywhere, just focus on the small details and keeping also background simple since the center of attention should be the characters and the mobs.

[The Detective]

All is fair and good. The shading is done right but the head shape is the main problem. The head looks somewhat compressed and unnatural. Almost alien in it's appearance, but all the facial features are done well as are clothes and hair.

bigCman321 responds:

This was done on purpose dude. The guy I based this painting on is almost alien in appearance. Also this painting is meant to be somewhat stylized. Not trying to make proportions boring.

http://thefilmstage.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/Sherlock_glow_crop.jpg

You must be racist against aliens... J/k, thanks for the review though.