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Good flash

I actually liked this one. It was pretty funny, it had a saturday morning cartoon vibe to it. The animation was smooth and the art direction was nice. I liked the humor, some of the jokes were funny and subtle. Good job on this.

Good, fairly simple

It's a good, fairly simple idea. I can see drawing with a mouse was pretty difficult, the edges looks shabby. Nice punchline, other than choppy art I could say the frame-rate was very well done as it's consistent and somewhat smooth.

Great.

Pretty funny collab. I found the last one pretty funny. There wasn't a boring moment really. Good job.

What is this some sort of joke?

What derived you to think this was a good idea? It's a 10 second flash with a joke that isn't even funny. The poor voice quality and picture quality just adds insult to injury.

Leezone responds:

Sorry to have injured your refined and experienced sensibilities. not everyone understands my complicated sense of humor. lol

good by portal standards

it's good to see a portal submission with effort put into it. It's hard to find anyone that cares, or isn't a spammer anymore. Though not masterfully done I can see some real effort was put into the flash and some of the jokes were pretty funny. I hope to see more from you in the future!

nothing i haven't seen

Stick figure fight animations are a dime a dozen, and this one hardly does much to stand out from the pack. aside from an opening cutscene and some dramatic slow-mo in the mix, there isn't much substance here to make me think I have seen anything special.

eduacational

I assume you got an A? Good job. The yellow stars voice sounds off, sounds like you were shooting for something you didn't quite get. The animation of the characters was smooth so kudos on that.

kinda cool

It's abstract and unexpected. Pretty good, it was something new.

Awesome

This was great, really really funny, as it was unexpected. good music, good design, only complaint was when the dog was walking, it looked more like sliding or something. Good job though.

Okay

Okay. This wasn't very bad, it needs voice actors, perhaps sound effects as well. There were some parts of the animation you need to fix, such as when the creature reaches to take off it's mask, it looked like his hand just came out of the ground. The ending made very little sense to me either. Being the first episode you should have explained what this "tournament" was. Perhaps in the second episode.

Patronium20 responds:

These should help you answer your comments sweet21!

1. When I try to put voices in, the scenes became out of sync with the audio, that's why I used subtitles.
2. The hand DID go through the ground. Explained in later episodes.
3. There is an Episode 1: PT 2... meaning this first episode isn't over yet

I wanna make video games! Yeah!

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