sweet21's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deserted Hell]

It's super keen. Yeah thats right. the melody is pretty good, I like the tone and the rhythm as well. Is progresses well and fits naturally. Good job.

TrueWolf123 responds:

Thanks sweet

[Procrastinating...]

Mellow. Very simplistic, not very special. Unfortunately it doesn't loop very smoothly so it can't find much use in a game or something.

[Walls_v1]

Sloppy notes, the timing is abit off. When you kick in two instruments their rhythms contradict and don't sound too well. They end up overlapping each other and it doesn't sound natural. The (I assume) drums can sound abit more natural if you make them quieter so they don't overshadow the main instrument. You can then sync them more properly with the main rhythm. They seem to be doing their own thing.

Blazirc responds:

ty for your criticism, I will work on it in my next song

[Mortal Kombat!]

Funkylicious. Great track and great remix.

AeronMusic responds:

Thank you! ;D

[Voice Demo - "Idina"]

Alot of the voices sound the same....in fact I think you just used the same voice the whole way through. In order to make a great demo you need to show us variation. Sometimes the will to yell in front of the mic isn't good enough.
I know you can do impressions right? How about some original voices? Show us what those vocal chords can do!

SonicRocksMySocks responds:

I specified that this was a recording for a single character. I'll be putting other examples up soon though :)

[Quick Lessons]

I liked it. It was a fun track to listen to, nice rhythms and such, hilarious lyrics.

premix407 responds:

I appreciate the love, if you thought those lyrics were funny you should check out the other track i posted http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/484225

[Energy]

For energy it's quite slow. You do good by adding more instruments and rhythms as the track progresses but you wait too long it ultimately feels dull. Speed up the transitions, shorten the track. It has a nice beat and rhythm. I liked it.

RawrMeowPrrr responds:

I personally enjoy slow and dull songs. :P But I will put it into consideration of speeding up the transitions and shortening this long track. Thank you for liking it anyways. :)

[Summit]

Average. Somewhat generic sounding, it has a slight kick but not very interesting and it gets pretty repetitive.

NikeTheSword responds:

Thanks for the review. If you have an idea how to avoid repetiveness in the future, do PM me! I'm currently working on that exact side in composing. :)

[Rx Required]

Tis funky.
Good catchy rhythm but it's somewhat repetitive. You mix it up with some electronic sounds but those are hit and miss sometimes. Then it just bounces off into something completely new in the last thirty seconds or so.

DJFunkkyy responds:

I am still a beginner at this but thank you for your criticism. I did make it go to something completely new at the end. it felt repetitive near the end so it mixed it up a little.

[SGKR - Track 1]

Damn good track, consistent rhythm and catchy. Nice 8-bit feel to it. Very good, varied and unique. It will work great for whatever project you plan on using it for.

silverblazebrony responds:

Thanks! :b
I'll be putting up a blog about the project pretty soon, so you'll be able to see what it is this song is in.