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Im not here to lecture but the point of posting art here is to get constructive criticism. Covering it up, censoring, or watermarking in any way makes the idea of posting somewhat redundant. That in mind onto the actual piece.
...Is good.
Pretty colors, clear expression, nice stylized look and decent attention to detail. Nice shading as well. However her right arm (camera view) bothers me. It seems like its a good length but it feels stubby for whatever reason. Feel free to ignore the arm comment but if you can figure it out go right ahead and fix it.

Thats cool and all Richard, its nice and cute and stylized and such. Colors are balanced, the mood is conveyed greatly, but image quality seems like it suffered abit. they are grainy pixels littering about the screen.

The ears look more like they are stapled to the side of her head. They aren't free or loose looking. They should look like they are stemming from a growth point. Also the right ear sticks flat to her head. Because the 3/4 view is in fact...3/4 you shouldn't be able to see that much of it.
She's also biting her tongue.
Scarf texture isn't very consistent. Circular sheen is for soft textures like the backs of turtle shells, a scarf is fabric so it either shouldn't shine at all or shine should be sharp and convey a coarse texture.

Oh snap! Her hand is kinda tiny and her cleavage doesn't quite match what is suppose to be the size of her breasts. She looks pretty flat, so when the cleavage appears it looks like shes squeezing...air? Maybe she has toilet paper under there. Anyway, the piece is nice, well drawn and well shaded.
But there is no defined mood. Its grey so it feels like it should be sad, but shes happy, and its not like a sinister kind of happy either. Im not sure about the mood trying to be conveyed.
I feel as though color would have helped.

Stellar look. Grabs the attention and just looks really epic. Everything is nice and stylized and great use of colors.

If I were in that situation my first thought would be 'Holy fuck there's an octopus on my head' but it would then be overshadowed by 'Shit, im running out of air, how did I get down here in the first place?'
I would then realize it was all a dream but then remember it was one of THOSE dreams where if you poop in your dreams you poop for reals, where then I would have to change the sheets.
So congratulations, your piece made me think which is more than I can say about everything else.

five stars would look at again.

Madame-origami responds:

I like you.

Sharp and saggy boobs aside everything is wonderfully stylized. Wait, another problem, whats up with her right thumb? Shes not even gripping the can just touching it. Oh well, still pretty rad.

Mosamabindrawin responds:

Thanks nigz

Feels very empty. Its a very, very basic picture with no personal twist or spin on the design. In fact, if it wasn't for the bloody nose and the reference in the description I would have never guessed what the theme was. The idea she 'party's hard' isn't prominent enough.

There isn't much to say but if I am to nitpick or poke at minor flaws I would have to say the beams don't have a source. They just kinda go across the screen.

Well, all I can say is keep at it. You can do better.

jake-thesnake responds:

thanks for the review. really helps me to think more about my artwork in general, thanks for the criticism!

Nice job. Excellent look, shading and use of red to pop out even more.
Hopefully this survives the wash...

Stark-Heather responds:

Thanks!. Yes, it survived.lol

That would actually be a cool half mask to wear. Much better than that overused skull half mask. But I got a bone to pick with those eyes. They look larger than life. on a side note, tiny horns.

Orvein responds:

I love big eyes, so all my girls have wide and disproportionate eyes)

I wanna make video games! Yeah!

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