I love this guys narration, just hilarious. lots of cheesy puns and clever jokes, a good caricature of cliche gumshoe detectives. I like the use of colors later on in the video. overall, just hilarious.
Thanks a lot!
Hey, pretty good. Awesome, very, for a lack of a better term, animated style. Nice and bouncy, very fluid and really well made. I also enjoyed alot of the jokes. Overall great animation.
You know what? Yeah. Yeah, thats basically it. Especially the heart attack bit. Fun fact, im actually dead right now, but luckily I found a pheonix down and im no longer dead.
Also, nice art.
If you want advice on future game design decisions, I would recommend not making the first platform dangerous right out of the gate. Typically you give the player a small area where they can prance around and test out the controls. As it stands, on hard mode you just start off dead if you dont move, falling platforms punish anyone wanting to catch their breath. Falling platforms are good obstacles mid stage, but not starting out, and certainly not every platform. Games dont have to be a non stop rush. It's good to take a break and have safe areas every once in a while.
Thank you for your feedback! This is my first game, and was mostly a learning experience on how to use Unity. Thanks for helping.
I absolutely love this games satire and theme. The game is charmingly funny and great.
Excellent sound design mixes with great themes.
The game is also surprisingly challenging and fun with plenty of variation and clear goals. The objective is simple but the various obstacles make each level genuinely fun.
I'm surprised to say that for a doughnut eating game I was actually interested to see what was in the next level.
Good job man.
Thanks sweet21! So pleased you liked it :D
Decent space shooter. I like narrative of 'hes just bad, go get him' it gives the game some personality but it ends there unfortunately. The game itself is decent. The game looks alright, and the music fits it well. However I've never been a fan of auto fire and the ship moves painfully slow, even with upgraded movement speed.
I did have fun with it but there are so many others like it this just felt somewhat generic.
Have I mentioned how much I love this? Mmm such nice smooooooooth jazz. Really nice, relaxing rhythm and sweet variety. First the sax, then the piano jumps in, meanwhile the drums keep on going, hittin' the hat, hittin' the hat, great. Keeps a consistent mood. Sax comes back with a new melody, just great. Excellent piece.
Mm, this sounds funkaaaaay. Nice piano and bass.
Why thank you :3.
Sounds cool. It loops rather well. Nice.
I was expecting it to move. -5 points. It looks good, positive 4 points. If you add bacon i'll give you another point. Good work.
Too empty, it feels like an incomplete piece. Theres more I can say you COULD have done that I can say you actually did. What you did do was draw a face and an alien turtle thing. What you could have done was add a body, a setting, a mood, colors, and general atmosphere. You look like you have skill but I can't really see it here.
Appreciate the criticism.
I rather like it, so nice detailed....unfortunately he looks very clean. He's covered in dirt and blood but he doesn't feel rugged in any sense, and I point to thee! SMOOTHNESS! His skin looks really really smooth, smoother than a rock you find at the beach. In fact, so does everything else. Everything has very high gloss and shine, it works the exact opposite effect intended.
You get points for good looking clothes and otherwise accurate anatomy...And dat hair.
I agree with this and have fixed it! Thanks so much for the great critique, its definitely helped improve some of my later work as well!
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